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Saturday 29 October 2016

WHOOSH-Written By Tayla

Bob was out in the sun shiny day having so much fun getting heaps of fish with gooey seaweed on it.

After about 3 hours he started hearing loud thunder noises then rain started pouring down. The waves were very bad there was water on the boat.

He had to close the window and lock in the steering wheel.He forgot to wear a lifejacket! He had to hold on to the rope on the side of the boat.Then he had to check that everything on  Boat was okay.

Then suddenly out of nowhere there was this green thing.It was bold it had big eyes and the weirdest thing about it was he was floating on water with an umbrella and everything just stopped the water stopped waving every were and he flew on his umbrella and stomped on bobs face. Then everything started happening the water was crazy the boat was filled with water.


After that the green thing washed away the boat broke and Bob drowned and it weirdest story ever told.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tayla

    your writing is interesting keep up the great work!!!!

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  2. Hi Tayla

    your writing is interesting keep up the great work!!!!

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