Hi Tayla, you are right - your second comment is much better and it has excellent spelling and punctuation as well as a lovely greeting and question. Great job! Can you make a link with Shoneve somehow. For example, do you like swimming too?
Kia ora Tayla, You made a big improvement on your comment - it's very friendly and helpful and gives Shoneve an idea of something she could add to her speech. How did your speech go?
Hi Tayla, you are right - your second comment is much better and it has excellent spelling and punctuation as well as a lovely greeting and question. Great job! Can you make a link with Shoneve somehow. For example, do you like swimming too?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tayla, You made a big improvement on your comment - it's very friendly and helpful and gives Shoneve an idea of something she could add to her speech. How did your speech go?
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